tauren@lemm.ee to Comic Strips@lemmy.worldEnglish · 3 days agoTaking Criticism | Poorly Drawn Linespoorlydrawnlines.comexternal-linkmessage-square14fedilinkarrow-up1947arrow-down15
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minus-squarelongjohnjohnson@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up41·3 days agoI like the subtle use of the two different color backgrounds to indicate a frame/perspective shift from within the same room. Well done.
minus-squaremerde alors@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up9arrow-down1·3 days agoi think it’s rather because in second and third we’re in its head, we can read what it’s thinking
minus-squaretetris11@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down2·3 days agoHe closes his eyes only on the third panel. We never follow him into his head. I wager it’s more a perspective/mood shift
minus-squaremerde alors@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up6·3 days agolook at the speech bubble compared to the thought bubble. It’s not speaking. We “follow it into its head”
I like the subtle use of the two different color backgrounds to indicate a frame/perspective shift from within the same room. Well done.
Even the plant disappears
i think it’s rather because in second and third we’re in its head, we can read what it’s thinking
He closes his eyes only on the third panel. We never follow him into his head. I wager it’s more a perspective/mood shift
look at the speech bubble compared to the thought bubble.
It’s not speaking. We “follow it into its head”